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托福独立写作应该避免的开头方式

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俗话说“题好文一半”,一个好的托福写作开头的重要性不言而喻。 大家都希望能通过好的开头,可以吸引考官的注意,从而使他对你的作文有个好印象,可是,如果开头十分糟糕,它便足以“完美”地祸害这次托福考试。下面是小编为大家分享的托福写作应避免的开头方式。
  
  1、废话连篇急煞读者
  
  失败案例:
  
  Topic --Should college students be allowed to get married?
  
  This topic is very interesting. I am very interested in talking about this topic. Because I am also a college student and I am not married……
  
  修改方案:开门见山 直奔主题
  
  In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。
  
  2、观点不明态度暧昧
  
  失败案例:
  
  Topic--Should college students be allowed to get married?
  
  I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only 17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
  
  3、渐行渐远 离题千里
  
  失败案例:
  
  Topic---It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?
  
  I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places。
  
  4、中式英语人见人跪
  
  失败案例:
  
  Topic 1-The happiest moment in your life
  
  In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
  
  Topic 2- The population problem
  
  The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there。
  
  Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
  
  I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chop when I go out buy things……
  
  Topic 4- The advantage of being a nice person
  
  Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a person always does bad things, he will get “baoying”。

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