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托福写作资料库: 挑战性的工作是否为你带来更多幸福感

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【观点类】:

People will feel happier when they finish a challenging or difficult work than an easy job.当人们完成一项很有挑战性或困难的工作的时候,人们更加幸福,是否认同? (2009 年8月2日)

【相关题目】:

Which is a better choice, challenging plans about one's future or practical plans about one's future? 挑战性的计划和实际的计划,哪个是更好的选择?


1. 生活中无以伦比的幸福就是坚信我们可以通过诚实努力,实现心中梦想。过程的艰难提升了成功后的幸福指数,因为努力,期待,等待的过程使成功后的喜悦变得弥足珍贵。

2. 当你可以坚持别人坚持不了的坚持,当你可以忍受别人忍受不了的忍受的时候,你也将会信心倍增。当你可以完成他人无法完成的任务,自我成就感自然带来心灵的满足。

3. 通常,梦想似乎遥不可及,但是,即使在圆梦的路上充满挫败,我们的幸福感,我们的锦绣前程就在这些挫败的背后藏身。 

【文章布局】:

首段:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

二段:次支持作家立场

三段:第二次支持作家立场

四段:让步对立观点的合理性 + 反驳其不合理性

尾段:再次亮明观点 + (总结理由)

【原创范文】:

{首段}:背景介绍 + 争议焦点 + 作家立场

Every individual desires to achieve success. Pitifully, we sometimes dare not to accept challenging tasks because we have often experienced the frustration that derives from failure. However, we play to win, and our lives have little meaning unless we do our utmost to win. In this sense, compared with finishing easy jobs,only striving for demanding tasks can enable us to savor the supreme sense of well-being.

【解析】:

1. Every individual desires to achieve success 人人渴望成功。

2. Pitifully,we sometimes dare not to accept challenging tasks because we have often experienced the frustration that derives from failure. 令人遗憾的是:我们有时候不敢接受挑战性的任务,是因为以往的经验告诉我们有些事情是办不到的。

3. Compared with finishing easy jobs,only striving for demanding tasks can enable us to savor the supreme sense of well-being. 对比完成简单工作,为充满挑战的任务而奋斗才能使我们感受到最多的快乐。

 

{二段}:第二次支持作家立场:

Also, when I stick to what most people fail to persist, when I can tolerate most people fail to endure, my self-assertiveness grows. The satisfaction of knowing that I successfully did something others cannot do multiplies my happiness index. As a fancier of self-travel,I once explored Tibet by myself,instead of choosing a metropolis as my sightseeing destination,I opted for a challenging city,what I needed to get over includes altitude stress,cultural differences and the lack of vehicle. However, the stunning landscapes such as spacious lake, lofty mountains and fascinating buildings are only exclusive to Tibet. Imaginably, the success of finishing hard self-trip in Tibet brought me unique happiness that I can never acquire when visiting other scenic spots.

【解析】:

1. Also, when I stick to what most people fail to persist, when I can tolerate most people fail to endure, my self-assertiveness grows. 当我可以坚持别人坚持不了的坚持,当我可以忍受别人忍受不了的忍受的时候,我也将会信心倍增。

2. The satisfaction of knowing that I successfully did something others cannot do multiplies my happiness index. 知道我可以完成他人无法完成的任务确实增强我的幸福指数。

3. What I needed to get over includes altitude stress,cultural differences and the lack of vehicle. 我要克服高原反应,文化差异,甚至是交通工具的匮乏。

4. The stunning landscapes such as spacious lake, lofty mountains and fascinating buildings are only exclusive to Tibet. 壮丽的景色,例如辽阔的大湖,宏伟的大山,迷人的建筑,也只有在西藏,我们才能欣赏。

{三段}:次支持作家立场:

To begin with, the incomparable happiness of life is the conviction that we can achieve what our hearts desire by honest hard work. It is no easy task to fulfill our ambition,the harder the process is,the happier our hearts will be. For example, when I climb a high mountain, I need to face up to many unexpected hardships such as capricious weather,steep rocks even possible exhaust of physical strength, however, the arduousness of surmounting the cliffy mountain is much more thrilling than a normal self-travel. What rewards me is the greatest contentment coming from beautiful expectation,constant wade and time-consuming wait.

【解析】:

1. The incomparable happiness of life is the conviction that we can achieve what our hearts desire by honest hard work. 生活中无以伦比的幸福就是坚信我们可以通过诚实努力,实现心中梦想。

2. I need to face up to many unexpected hardships such as capricious weather,steep rocks even possible exhaust of physical strength 我不得不面对很多意想不到的艰难,例如莫测的天气,陡峭的岩石,甚至是体能的消耗。

3. The arduousness of surmounting the cliffy mountain is much more thrilling than a normal self-travel. 征服陡峭高山的艰辛远比常态的自由行更加令人兴奋。

{四段}:让步对立观点的合理性:

Granted, I have to concede that some people might remain suspicious of my stand. Some people might believe happy life needs no challenges, challenges might make them doubt ourselves, dampen their enthusiasm and even ruin their sense of satisfaction. Nevertheless, I want to refute that those who enjoy adversity-free youths can easily be derailed by few setbacks later on. One the best ways to acquire resilience and embrace success is through experiencing a difficult growth experience.

【解析】:

1. Some people might remain suspicious of my stand.也许有人对我的立场持怀疑态度。

2. Those who enjoy adversity-free youths can easily be derailed by few setbacks later on. 那些青春岁月顺风顺水的人,在未来的生活中,很容易因为一点点挫败就迷失方向。

3. One the best ways to acquire resilience and taste happiness is through experiencing a difficult growth experience. 使人变得达观,拥抱成功的方式之一就是经历一段艰难的成长岁月。

{尾段}:再次亮明观点 + 总结理由:

In closing, my stand is that people will feel happier when they finish a challenging task than a relaxing job. Oftentimes,dream just seems too far out of reach, however, though hardships may sometimes stand in the way of our dreams,our sense of happiness, our rosy future are hiding behind them.

【解析】:

Oftentimes,dream just seems too far out of reach. However,though hardships may sometimes stand in the way of our dreams,our sense of happiness, our rosy future are hiding behind them. 通常,梦想似乎遥不可及。然而,即使在圆梦的路上充满挫败,我们的幸福感,我们的锦绣前程就在这些挫败的背后藏身。

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