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从托福写作句式看英语水平

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同学们在托福写作中都有自己的写作风格,但一句式稍做改动,就可以显示同学们更高的英语水平能力,下面成都新航道小编就为大家举例说明:

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

改进:Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.

改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

改进:You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.

改进: They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

通过以上13个句式例子,同学们可以看到自己英语水平能力的欠缺和需要改进的地方,同学们可以按照这些规律,写出更好的文章,祝同学们考试大捷。

 

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