从托福写作句式看英语水平

同学们在托福写作中都有自己的写作风格，但一句式稍做改动，就可以显示同学们更高的英语水平能力，下面成都新航道小编就为大家举例说明：

1. The artist's work pushes our civilization to a higher level.

改进：Artists' work upgrades our civilization.

2. For example, you work in a big factory.

改进: Suppose you work in a big factory.

3. You'll find you are fit for business and you can make it your main job.

改进：You'll find that you are cut out for business and you can make it your career.

4. We will own nothing at all if we depend on luck.

改进: We will get nowhere if we rely on luck.

5. He will get a higher salary to improve his living level.

改进: He will get a higher salary, thus improving his life.

6. Their brain is still very young.

改进: They are still immature.

7. Dissatisfaction makes people produce desire for better things.

改进: Dissatisfaction impels people for the better.

8. They can't analyze clearly what is right and what is wrong.

改进: They cannot tell right from wrong.

9. It will help children to form a good habit of dealing with time.

改进: It will help children learn to make good use of time.

10. Though it is not the best job, it afford to his life.

改进: Though it is not the best job, a job is a job. He can make ends meet with it.

11. Since people are always not satisfied with their present situation, they want further development.

改进: Since people are never satisfied with their status quo, they want further development.

12. The only thing they need to do is to find a job which can easily get big money.

改进: The only thing they need to do is to find a job that can bring them big money.

13. They like an active life but not a peaceful life.

改进: They like an active life rather than a peaceful one.

通过以上13个句式例子，同学们可以看到自己英语水平能力的欠缺和需要改进的地方，同学们可以按照这些规律，写出更好的文章，祝同学们考试大捷。

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