9月已经过半,8月的雅思考试同学们有回忆分析过吗?真题是我们备考中非常重要的资料,通过对真题的分析我们可以了解它的题型和出题方式,说不定后面考试的同学就遇到了同样类型的考题甚至是原题呢。新航道成都雅思培训老师已经进行了2021年8月雅思写作考题回顾与分析,大家一起来了解看看吧!
1、真题速览
8月雅思笔考考试一共4场,其中大作文考试题目如下:
2、难点剖析
本月4道考题,覆盖了雅思写作常见题型,1篇discuss both views,1篇agree or disagree,1篇综合文和1篇利弊分析。话题涵盖:教育、科学技术、以及旅游发展。
(1)话题部分:其中较难构思论点的是8月7日“孩子有没有犯错自由”。学生可以理解题目却很难提出足够的论点。可供参考的论点如下:
View 1:
论点1:孩子们还太小,不知道该如何保护自己远离危险( most children are too young to ward off the dangers.)举例:knife,fire,electricity这种时候就需要父母履行其监护人义务(For the aforementioned cases, it is justifiable for the guardians’ intervention, which shields those children from hurting themselves.)
论点2:孩子们还没有明辨是非的能力(with the absence of the ability to tell right from wrong),一些错误行为不加引导可能会导致青少年犯罪(children might never realize what they have done is unacceptable, which in the long run will lead to the pattern of misbehaviors,even youth crimes, be they bully or theft.)
View 2:
论点1:在一定的限制条件下(under the supervision of guardians),允许孩子试错来积累经验,验证想法(children should be allowed to learn from experiences. As long as young individuals are well-instructed, they are highly likely to learn from their mistakes about how to tell right from wrong, to take all factors into consideration before making decisions, and to reflect upon and correct themselves.)
论点2:父母的过度监管可能会事与愿违(too much interference on children’s making mistakes may incur repercussions running counter to adults’ expectation.)过度的控制可能会导致孩子们逆反,(excessive control over children will fuel their grumble and push them to be rebellious.)更加听不进去建议,甚至故意犯错(they are less likely to follow every piece of advice from adults. Some might even make mistakes deliberately in revenge.)
(2)题型部分:从题型设置来看,8月21日的题目存在一定的逻辑陷阱。本题目需要论证的是“科学研究应该是政府还是企业来控制”,本质上是政府和企业的对比,不管是同意,不同意或者中立,这篇文章的内容都应该涵盖the government和companies。如果某个同学全文都在写政府如何如何好的话,那么就偏离了题目的终点,导致Task response只能算是部分回应题目导致丢分。
综合考生容易出现的问题,5月8日题目的建议提纲以及可用短语如下:
开头段:
建立争论:交代个人立场(There is on ongoing debate about whether the scientific research should be administered by the government or the companies)+个人立场:In my opinion,I am in favor of the government.
主体段1:让步+反驳
①让步:Granted,企业家们(entrepreneurs)可以利用天价薪水(astronomical salary)吸引(appeal)更多的天才科学家(genius scientist)。除此之外,企业的效率通常高于政府的官僚部门(bureaucracy)
②反驳:但是企业是逐利(money—driven)的,这些技术可能会被不当利用(undue use),比如垄断(monopoly)。
主体段2:立论
①某些科学研究需要大量的资金(money—consuming),只有政府才能承担得起(affordable for central state.)。比如:粒子碰撞机Particle collider.
②有的科学研究可能会武器化(weaponized),必须要有政府监管(be supervised by the government),不能由公司掌握。
3、高频考题(旅游景点类)
以上就是新航道成都雅思培训老师为大家带来的2021年8月雅思写作考题回顾与分析得分享,如果在备考中还有其他疑问,或是想要了解雅思培训课程,可以咨询在线客服。