很多同学都有这种误解，认为雅思写作就是要多用复杂的句型，秀出自己的文采！殊不知聪明反被聪明误，有时候由于语法错误或者词汇的匮乏，是的长句所表达的意思出现错误，使得文章变得难懂、费解、漏洞百出！而在雅思写作中，善用小词短句，使得文章清新易懂，也能吸引考官的青睐。

　　下面我们来看《IELTS PLUS》里的一段例文：

　　Avoiding pollution can be a full-time job. Try not to inhale traffic fumes; keep away from chemical plants and building-sites; wear a mask when cycling. It is enough to make you want to stay at home. But that，according to a growing body of scientific evidence， would also be a bad idea。Research shows that levels of pollutants such as hazardous gases，particulate matter and other chemical“nasties”are usually higher indoors than out，even in the most polluted cities. Since the average American spends 18 hours indoors for every hour outside， it looks as though many environmentalists may be attacking the wrong target.

　　没有矫揉造作的长难句型，没有生涩难懂的复杂词汇，通读全文，我们感觉到的是一种自然天成的清晰和流畅，这才是我们所追求的理想作文，才是我们所修炼的上乘武功。

　　这样清新流畅的语言风格，在考官范文中也比比皆是：

　　Many people find their rewards unfair, especially whencomparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientist,or even leading politicians who have the responsibility of governing thecountry. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contributionto society a person makes or the level of responsibility he or she holds.Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the levelof public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of‘fairness is not the issue. ——(《剑桥雅思6》)

　　长句(Many people find ……responsibility of governing the country。)短句(So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue。)相得益彰，大词(responsibility)小词(so)交相呼应，逻辑关系(comparing， however， instead)清晰明确，是考生们学习效仿的素材。

　　雅思写作之“要务”在于文章的可读性，也就是让读者更清晰明了地理解你文章的内容。而复杂的长难句和生硬的“大词”，势必会阻碍文章语言的流畅性和阅卷者思路的延续性，从而造成阅读障碍。而且，频繁使用长句大词无疑增加了出现语法错误和拼写失误的概率，从而导致失分。

　　语言是一门艺术，写作是创造艺术并享受艺术的过程。反复雕琢固然是美，却不及自然天成的美那样流畅自如。因此我们要敢于“砍掉”那些过于冗繁的长句和大词，就像雕塑家砍掉“伤美”的维纳斯的手臂！因此，恰当准确地使用“小词”“短句”，从而确保语言流畅清新，才是广大中国雅思考生急需掌握的“四两拨千斤”的雅思写作技巧。

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