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【雅思写作】2013年1月19日雅思考试大作文范文
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每一次雅思考试结束之后我们都会为大家准备雅思考试的范文,今天为大家准备的1月12日的雅思考试大作文的...

  
  每一次雅思考试结束之后我们都会为大家准备雅思考试的范文,今天为大家准备的1月12日的雅思考试大作文的范文详细的阐述了这类话题大作文应该怎么去写,从哪些方面入手,每一段重点是什么,这样的一个整体的范文指导,相信是很多考生最需要的,授之以鱼不如授之以渔。


  原题:Childcare is an important task for nations. It is suggested that all mothers and fathers should be required to take the childcare training courses. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?


  审题:


  段:是否所有的父母都应该参加育儿培训?


  第二段:育儿培训课程的意义


  幼儿身心全面发展


  第三段:也许传统育儿方式可以代代相传,但是:


  1出生率降低,人们缺少早年照顾弟妹或目睹父母照顾弟妹的经验


  2 父母和子女分开住,没有机会传承


  第四段:也许工作的父母没时间参加育儿培训课程,但是:


  1网络课程或者通过电视和收音机学习可以解决这个问题;课程设置可以比较灵活;


  2父亲学习育儿培训可以鼓励更多参与亲子活动


  第五段:支持育儿课程学习的必要性


  范文推荐:


  Childcare skills, which used to pass from generation to generation, nowadays have been developed into some formal courses in many countries and young parents are encouraged to register in these programs. I personally support such action.


  The development in one’s early stage of life is so vital that free access to professional childcare programs, which are not only about nutrition, for all parents should be available. The rationale behind my suggestion includes that young parents equipped with sufficient childcare knowledge about childcare can better protect their infants or toddlers from various risks, detect possible warning signs of development delay, better understand a child’s emotional needs and help establish healthy eating habits. Overall, these parents tend to help children grow to their fullest potential physically, emotionally and intellectually and these advantages would affect the future life of their children for long term.


  It is certainly true that our grandparents never attended any parenting classes and they raised our parents with no major regret. It seems that we could keep this tradition, learning from our parents. However, this is impractical in modern society. The decreasing birth rate and smaller scale of families means that the young generation have no chance to help mum take care of their little siblings or witness the process and learn some from their mum. And they are largely no longer living under the same roof with their parents when they grow up and hence have little chance to learn from their parents how to raise a baby properly.


  It is also understandable that working parents are sometimes not in a position to get involved in formal parenting courses, especially fathers who usually are the bread earners and dedicate most of their time to their work and leave little time to their families. Nevertheless, such obstacles can be removed by flexible ways of delivering childcare courses, such as the Internet, TV or radio. Or the courses can last for a few years since young couples consider starting a family. In addition, research findings suggest that the increasing involvement of fathers in interactive activities with children helps with healthy development of a baby. Of course, since childcare training is related to the overall citizen quality of a nation, the government should cover all the cost and the parents do not have to worry about the fees.


  My personal point of view is that childcare training courses should be compulsory. They promote healthy development of a person in early stage of life, and this makes eligible parents, a happy family and a strong nation.


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