雅思写作是雅思考试四个部分中较为难以攻破的内容,很多考生在备考时都会选择真题进行练习,但他们一般都是盲目或者仓促的练习,而很少有人去研究其中的解题思路。下面成都新航道以2022年10月的雅思写作考试为例,通过分析题目去解开答题思路。
10月8日:修复旧建筑
The restoration of old buildings in major cities in the world costs numerous government’s expenditure. This money should be used in new housing and road development. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
10月13日:老人类 (雅思机考题目)
In many countries, workers over 60 can still be found in the workplace. However, some people think that this may cause social problems and these people should be retired. Do you agree or disagree ?
10月22日:噪音问题
The level of noise around us is constantly increasing and is affecting the quality of our lives. What causes the noise ? What should be done about it ?
10月29日:教育类
Some people think young people should be required to have full time education until they are at least 18 years old. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?
一、话题分析
今年10月的题目属于社会生活类爆发期,与8至9月真题规律雷同,即:13次考试中社会生活类占据8次。
但不同于9月的人工智能以及购物习惯这两个新话题,10月的考试题目比较常规。比如老人就业问题,修复旧建筑这两个万年考题。唯一的新题是10月底出现的噪音问题这个新话题,但相似于上季度口语题库的一个必备题目。
同学们在备考过程中,如果出现论点不足或不确定的情况,除了上课学习分析论点的方法以外,可配合参照新航道《雅思写作语料/素材收录”》这本书的中篇:分话题短语,提取自己所需。
对于即将要参加11月考试,特别是笔试的同学,要注意本年度出现频率较低的媒体类以及教育类话题。
二、题型分析
粗略说来,本月仍然持续议论文为主,报告文为辅的常规模式。但结合今年第一、第二季度每月均有报告文这一规律,11月以及12月的烤鸭备考中要留意做到全面复习。
同时,烤鸭需特别注意学习议论文的审题这一技巧,因10月题目延续了9月议论文题目存在对比以及并列关系这两个特质。在新航道的写作课程设计中,有很多实践审题的教学设置帮助大家提升TR,即Task Response任务完成度这一官方要求。
三、难题分析
走访了一圈10月的烤鸭,大家似乎对噪音这个话题感觉比较生疏。
因为写作和口语不同,需要层层递进的扩展和信息量,而非流利度考量,所以今天我们将逐段地去看看可以怎么回答这个话题:The level of noise around us is constantly increasing and is affecting the quality of our lives. What causes the noise ? What should be done about it ?
开头段:重述噪音是亟待解决的问题之一
Glaring sound has been one of the most urgent issue in both urban and suburb areas, which has caused much public concern. This essay will discuss possible contributing factors and feasible measures to deal with this issue.(这篇文章将会探讨可能的原因以及如何解决这个问题的可行措施)
第二段: 提出原因主要在于人类活动,接着进行例子扩展。
The main culprit lies in much human activists. (主要原因在于人类活动)For example, traffic noise due to expansion of cities and a sharp rise in automobiles has become increasingly significant.(由于城市的扩张和汽车数量的急剧增加,交通噪声变得越来越严重) Inconsistency between limited housing supply and rising demand means restricted average living space, which means noise of throwing a party or dog barking seem to be inevitable for people living next door.(有限的住房供应和日益增长的需求之间的不一致意味着平均居住空间的限制,这意味着聚会的噪音或狗叫声对于住在隔壁的人似乎是不可避免的。) Furthermore, construction of factories in rural areas has caused much industrial noise for suburban dwellers.
第三段:指出噪音可能带来的危害,接着开始阐述如何解决这个问题。
越来越多的研究发现噪音和不佳的身心健康是紧密相关的,所以执行有效的措施去减少这个问题应该受到政府的重视Repetitive studies have found that noise is closely linked to a degrading of physical and emotional wellbeing, and implementing effectual tactics to mitigate this issue should be prioritized by governments.
首要的是,法律应该被实施去控制不同领域的噪音污染legislation need to implemented to curb noise pollution in differing sectors. 比如,汽车制造商应该被法律要求去使用吸收噪音的轮胎以便建立对噪音的防御car-manufacturers are legally required to utilize noise absorption tires to have more effective noise barriers.
同样,那些householders who make noises need to be punished by heavy fines, on account of infringing others’ freedom of having a quiet living surrounding. 除此以外,soundproof infrastructure should be developed in suburb.
四、结尾
In essence, 人类活动,比如交通,制造,以及日常生活都应该为吵闹的环境负责( be blamed for); law-makers need to make a most urgent change to assuage this issue.
通过这篇作文,大家要着力积累关于措施的具体写法以便切实解决某个问题,那么其他的关于措施的题目有如下一些,用于大家思考论点:
Some businesses find that new employees who just finish their education lack basic interpersonal ability such as work with others as a part of team. What do you think the causes of this problem? What measures should be taken to solve this problem?
These days, an increasing number of people in many cities know little about their neighbors and do not have a sense of community. What do you think are the causes and what solutions can you suggest?
Many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries were suitable for life at that time, and cause many problems for people today.Describe the problems it may cause. Give the possible solutions.