小伙伴们雅思备考的怎么样了?今天成都新航道的小编为考生们带来了雅思写作的话题相关范文和解析,我们一起看看吧。接下来我们看一下这个话题,雅思写作:我们有权任意使用淡水吗?参考范文及解析,速来围观吧
雅思写作题目:
Some people think they have right to use as much fresh water as they want,but others believe government should control the use of fresh water as it is limited resource.Discuss both views and give your own opinion
雅思写作题目解析:
雅思不停,原题不止。12月10日的雅思大作文又翻版了
2013年9月28日的原题!
关于淡水使用,关于自然资源,这类话题虽然不常出现,但隔三差五地会出来显示自己的存在,因此,烤鸭也需要积累一定的相关素材和表达法。比较久远的如2010年4月10日的考题“飞机票便宜了,这是否对环境资源有消极的影响”,比较新近的如2015年8月1日的考题“自然资源消耗很快,你认为这是什么原因,如何解决?”。这些题目均与资源资源的消耗和保护有关。
有人认为他们有权任意使用淡水(fresh water),这是什么原因呢?无非是他们认为自己有钱购买,有权享受,而且认为世界上淡水多到用不完。这看似简单的的三个原因,其实就是唐老师多次讲过的雅思写作思维中的三个层次:有钱购买是物质层次,有权享受是心理层次,水资源无穷无尽是社会层次。那么,怎么反驳这些人呢?我觉得,人家有钱购买,有权享受这两个理由基本上是无法反驳的,但是如果从社会层面上看,我们就会发现有很多反驳的理由:首先,水资源是有限的,不是无穷无尽;其次,随着人口的增多,工农业的发展,用水量越来越大,因此水资源问题会给人类的生存带来毁灭性后果。因此,我们的结论就是:如果政府不限制淡水使用,终有一天到我们无法生存的时候,我们有再多的金钱,再多的权利,都是然并卵!
雅思写作题目高分范文及笔记:
We all,humans and non-humans alike,need fresh water for our survival.The issue is that a lot of people always try to make a case for their wasteful use of fresh water,arguing that they have money,and more importantly right to buy and use as much fresh water as they want.Their constant rhetoric is something like,"so what?Don't worry,for we have enough fresh water!"
(1)开头先提出话题,然后直接树靶子供后文批驳。文风也变得更加灵活,给烤鸭提供了一种另类雅思作文的范例:雅思作文注重个性化,只要合适,没有什么不可以!
(2)alike同样的,两者都(这样的看似小词,你会用吗?)(3)survival生存(4)make a case for...为......找借口(这样地道的词组,你
用过吗?)
(5)rhetoric说辞,修辞
Well,that is certainly not true.Even though they are rich and have been empowered to use as much fresh water as they like,they should try their best to conserve fresh water,because fresh water,like other natural resources,are actually limited.As scientists have told us,though the Earth might have many bodies of water,the fresh water comprises less than 2%of the world's total water volume,which is indeed a very small fraction.The remaining 98%is found in oceans,which is salt water and not suitable for our uses.Admittedly,the water cycle eventually returns water to Earth,yet it's not always returned to the same spot,or in the same quantity and quality.Failing to conserve water
can eventually lead to a lack of an adequate,healthy water supply,which can have drastic consequences in rising costs,reduced food supplies,health hazards and political conflict.
(1)本段论述淡水资源并非无穷尽,一旦资源枯竭会带来什么样的后果。本段内容比较丰富,句型词汇都相当复杂,高分段烤鸭可认真模仿。
(2)empower使......有权力(3)conserve保护;保存(4)natural resources自然资源(5)comprise构成(6)fraction小部分(7)eventually最终(8)drastic剧烈的(9)hazard危害;危险
To combat the anthropocentric claim of the unlimited right to use fresh water,we have to remember that,besides human beings,other animals and plants also need fresh water for their survival and growth.To sustain the ever-increasing population,we have already consumed tremendous amount of fresh water in agricultural irrigation,industrial production and electricity generation,not including those we drink in our daily life.It is,therefore,completely necessary for us human beings to save fresh water for other beings in the universe,on whom our own existence largely depends.
(1)本段写应该节约淡水使用的另一个原因,即:人类已经消耗了太多水资源,还应该考虑自然中其他动植物的生存。
(2)combat与......斗争(3)anthropocentric人类中心主义的(4)sustain供养,维持(5)irrigation灌溉
So,financially and civilly,people should be allowed the power to use the fresh water the way they like,but as the fresh water resource is rather limited and the it is so vital to the survival of both humans and non-humans,I think the government should take immediate actions to control the use of fresh water.
(1)本段为结尾段,总结前文观点,表明自己态度。
(2)civilly民法上地
(3)vital非常重要的
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