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雅思写作话题:城市人互不来往的原因及对策(下篇)

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之前成都新航道的小编为考生们整理了雅思写作话题:城市人互不来往的原因及对策(上篇),今天成都新航道小编接着雅思写作话题:城市人互不来往的原因及对策(篇),下面我们就一起看看吧!

 

When asked why they do not socialize with their neighbors,many people would respond by saying"Why should I?This is a dangerous city!"Indeed,modern media such as TV,newspaper and Internet have had way too much coverage about the city's crimes like theft,robbery and murder.People constantly exposed to such reports of the dark side of the city life may harbor the idea that nobody is trustworthy,including their neighbors.

(1)本段写第1个理由,即媒体的影响。开头句也一反模板,相当新颖。如果按照模板写:Firstly,many people do not socialize with their neighbors because they think the city is a dangerous place.这也完全可以,但就不是高分的节奏了!(雅思写作

(2)respond by saying的简单说法就是answer。(雅思写作

(3)way too much(表示否定)太多,过多,比如:She has spent way too much money on her dresses.(雅思写作

(4)people constantly exposed to such reports...may...长期阅读这类报道的人们会......。简单的表达就是:If people often read such reports,they may...不过,这个改动就把得分降至6分了。(雅思写作

(5)...harbor the idea that...有......的想法。harbor的简单用词是have。(雅思写作

On the other hand,people now do not feel any more the necessity to communicate with their neighbors or become part of a community.Anyway,they do not need their neighbors like they did before.They work,earn enough money and go back home to relax themselves.When they want to talk,they can just pick up their cellphone and talk to anybody in the world;when they have some brilliant ideas they want to share,they can get online with a few simple clicks and then post their ideas there.

(1)本段写第2个理由,即现代人没有实际需要与邻居交往。主要论述方式是举例:想与人交谈的时候......;想与人交流思想的时候......

(2)necessity必要性

(3)click敲键盘就是click the keyboard

But we all know that confinement to oneself is no good,no matter how many friends or fans you may have online.As part of the solution to the problem,I would suggest everybody have an"Internet-free moment".Simply put,we can set aside an hour every day,in which we try to reach out for our neighbors without a cellphone or laptop with us.Once we begin to care about real people around us,we will suddenly find ourselves living in a community that also cares about us.This experience is much more rewarding than having thousands of virtual friends who do not really know us.At the same time,all media should be fully aware of their share of responsibility in this problem,and try to bring more positive stories about the city life.

(1)本段写解决办法。主要写如何摆脱网络影响,也提及媒体报道。

(2)confinement to oneself封闭自我

(3)simply put简言之

(4)set aside抽出;留出

(5)rewarding有回报的

(6)virtual虚拟的

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