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雅思写作话题:用私家车真的好吗?

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今天成都新航道的小编为雅思考生们整理了雅思写作话题:用私家车真的好吗的参考文本及解析,希望对大家有所帮助!

 

雅思写作题目:

More and more people buy and use their own car.Do you think the advantages of this trend for individuals outweigh its disadvantages for environment?

雅思写作解析:

2004年中国汽车保有量是2400万辆,到2015年,这个数据已经达到1.37亿!也就是说,仅仅10年时间,活跃在中国大街小巷的汽车增加了500%!而这增加的车辆,多数都是私家车。的确,近些年中国的汽车行业发展太快了,以至于很多人对此都有意见。那么,9月15号雅思考题正是针对这样的一个问题。

开私家车让自己出行更方便,更有自由和舒适感,这些是买私家车的好处。但是,那么多人开私家车,我们又不得不考虑它们对环境的消极影响。这个不难理解。很多专家都指出,北京的雾霾(其实不只是北京,全世界稍微大点的城市,哪个没有雾霾?只是北京雾霾太严重,于是成了众人讥讽的城市,这有点不公平,大家都是五十步笑百步),很大程度上就是由于这个城市的车太多引起的。车一发动,灰尘(dust)扬起,尾气(exhaust gas)外喷,的确容易污染空气。讨论完私家车对个人的好处以及对环境的坏处后,我们的观点应该是什么呢?这里就没有所谓正确答案了。你可以说自由和方便高于一切,可以开发新的科技来解决由此引起的环境问题;你也可以说环境高于一切,出行的方便可以通过改进公交系统来解决;你还可以说,自由方便和环境都很重要,但呼吁尽量减少用车时间,共同维护美好环境,等等。对于这类discuss both viewsnd give your own opinion的题目,讨论双方观点后,主要是要提

出自己判断的标准,然后用这个标准来说明自己支持哪个观点。

高分范文及笔记:

Just 50 years ago,to own a car was quite a luxury,but today,cars have found their way into many households.Statistics show in China alone,there are over 140 million cars running on road every day.While cars have brought about conveniences to their users,they have imposed great pressure on the environment.

(1)本段用比较方法引出话题,然后用数据补充,最后重述题目观点。这种做法可以让段显得生动活泼。如果千篇一律地使用如下开头,则会使文章没有生机:

A.With the development of the society,more and more people buy and use their own car.

B.When it comes to the car ownership and use,many people think they are good to the individuals but very bad to the environment.

这两种典型的作文开头法虽然可以,但正因为其,就显得没有任何个性,而显示出作者的个性,是作文得到高分的必需。引用数据或者通过比较来引入话题,就显得更为独特。

(2)luxury奢华

(3)find one's way to/into...进入到......(比简单的enter显

得更为地道,生动!)

(4)in China alone...仅仅在中国(这里的alone与孤独没有任何关系,表示“仅仅”)

(5)impose pressure on...给......施加了压力

Modern city life has made the car an indispensable means of transport.Though most cities today have fairly advanced

transportation systems like the bus and metro,they tend to be extremely crowded,especially in rush hours.This means you might come to your office late or miss some important appointments.If you drive your own car,these problems may well be avoided.At the same time,when you plan to take your family for a trip out of town,you may also enjoy the flexibility of when to start off and when to return,rather than spending time waiting for the bus to arrive.

(1)本段论证汽车给人们生活带来的便利:是公交或地铁太拥挤,可能因此上班迟到;第二是全家出去旅游时更灵活。

(2)indispensable不可或缺的

(3)means of transport/transportation交通运输工具

(4)rush hours(上下班)高峰期

(5)flexibility灵活性

However,the increased use of cars has caused serious consequences for our environment.Many experts,for instance,attributes the worsening air quality in big cities to the cars’exhaust gas emission and the dust that rises after them.This accusation is perhaps well-grounded if you make a little comparison between the air quality 50 years ago and that now.In addition to the waste gas and dust,cars also make unbearable noises,which is a headache to all city dwellers.Just imagine a time you are shocked awake from your cozy dream by the sharp braking screech of a car passing by your house!

(1)本段讨论汽车对环境的影响,一是造成了空气质量下降,二是造成了很多噪音。本段最后一句也是一个个性表达的范例!

(2)consequences后果

(3)attribute...to...将......归因于......

(4)exhaust gas emission尾气释放

(5)well-grounded有依据的

(6)city dweller城市居民

(7)screech尖叫声

In my view,it is unrealistic for the government to put a ban on the car ownership or use since the cars have been so important in our daily life,yet we cannot overlook the negative effects they have on the environment.To get out of this dilemma,to my mind,there are two options,the first being to develop car technology and produce cars that burn less fuel and the second,encourage the car owners to use public transportation whenever possible.

(1)本段表达自己的观点,提出汽车和环境都需要,并因此提出了两个选择方案:一是设计耗油少的汽车,二是鼓励大家尽量选坐公共交通。

(2)unrealistic不现实的

(3)overlook忽视

(4)dilemma困境

(5)option选择

(6)...there are two options,the first being to develop car technology...该句后半部分是独立主格结构,因此用being,而不能用is。在有把握的前提下,偶尔使用一下这种高端句型,有可能给考官留下好印象。如果没有把握,就要老老实实地写:...there are two options.The first one is to develop car technology...

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