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雅思写作题目:
City dwellers seldom socialize with their neighbors today and the sense of community has been lost.Why has this happened and how to solve this problem?
雅思写作解析:
大家有没有这种感觉:到底从什么时候起,我们开始不再与邻里交往?到底从什么时候起,我们开始不再愿意加入一个群体?9月24日的雅思大作文给了一个机会让我们去思考。原因当然是多方面多层次的,在短短的250字内不可能谈完谈深。我在想,也许是我受到了媒体的影响,认为邻居可能不是好人,可能会抢我,甚至害我;也许是家里的网络给了我太多归属感,让我沉醉在虚拟世界里。我知道,远离邻里,远离社区,害怕甚至拒绝与真人打交道,这是常见的一种现代人疾病。所以建议烤鸭们从今天写完这篇作文开始,每天抽出1-2小时,不带手机,不带ipad,也不带电脑,去与邻居交流,去加入社区活动,敞开心扉,将心比心,去交几个真正的朋友!
雅思写作高分范文及笔记:
Now we have numerous newspaper reports about a child being robbed without anybody offering to help him or a ninety-year-old poor woman dead at home for days without anybody knowing it.All these reports point to one key problem that face dwellers in cities,especially big cities:they seldom interact with
their neighbors,much less to say they care about their neighbors and they feel lonely because they do not feel they belong to any community.
(1)本段提出现象:城市居民互不来往,互不关心,时时感到孤独。
(2)numerous许多(可用来替换many,a lot of)
(3)point to指向;指明
(4)much less to say更不必说
When asked why they do not socialize with their neighbors,many people would respond by saying"Why should I?This is a dangerous city!"Indeed,modern media such as TV,newspaper and Internet have had way too much coverage about the city's crimes like theft,robbery and murder.People constantly exposed to such reports of the dark side of the city life may harbor the idea that nobody is trustworthy,including their neighbors.
(1)本段写第1个理由,即媒体的影响。开头句也一反模板,相当新颖。如果按照模板写:Firstly,many people do not socialize with their neighbors because they think the city is a dangerous
place.这也完全可以,但就不是高分的节奏了!
(2)respond by saying的简单说法就是answer。
(3)way too much(表示否定)太多,过多,比如:She has spent way too much money on her dresses.
(4)people constantly exposed to such reports...may...长期阅读这类报道的人们会......。简单的表达就是:If people often read such reports,they may...不过,这个改动就把得分降至6分了。
(5)...harbor the idea that...有......的想法。harbor的简单用词是have。On the other hand,people now do not feel any more the necessity to communicate with their neighbors or become part of a community.Anyway,they do not need their neighbors like they did before.They work,earn enough money and go back home to relax themselves.When they want to talk,they can just pick up their cellphone and talk to anybody in the world;when they have some brilliant ideas they want to share,they can get online with a few simple clicks and then post their ideas there.
(1)本段写第2个理由,即现代人没有实际需要与邻居交往。主要论述方式是举例:想与人交谈的时候......;想与人交流思想的时候......
(2)necessity必要性
(3)click敲键盘就是click the keyboard
But we all know that confinement to oneself is no good,no matter how many friends or fans you may have online.As part of the solution to the problem,I would suggest everybody have an"Internet-free moment".Simply put,we can set aside an hour every day,in which we try to reach out for our neighbors without a cellphone or laptop with us.Once we begin to care about real people around us,we will suddenly find ourselves living in a community that also cares about us.This experience is much more rewarding than having thousands of virtual friends who do not really know us.At the same time,all media should be fully aware of their share of responsibility in this problem,and try to bring more positive stories about the city life.
(1)本段写解决办法。主要写如何摆脱网络影响,也提及媒体报道。
(2)confinement to oneself封闭自我
(3)simply put简言之
(4)set aside抽出;留出
(5)rewarding有回报的
(6)virtual虚拟的
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