雅思写作并不是需要把我们所学和所记得的英语难词或者难句都拼凑到文章里就可以的，以为这样就可以得到高分的，其实不然，文章写出来就是要人看得懂，能够顺畅的理解作者的意思的文章才是好文章，下面就来看看成都新航道小编为大家收集整理的写作开头的失败案例及修改方案，希望有帮到大家。
失败案例一： Topic1-Should college students be allowed to get married?
This topic is very interesting. I’m very interested in talking about this topic. Because I’m also a college student and I’m not married……
修改方案：开门见山直奔主题
In my opinion, it would not be a wise decision to allow college students to get married。
Topic2-Will modern technology, such as the Internet, ever replace the book or the writing word as the sole source of information?(雅思真题)
Ok, this topic is a very good topic. First, let me tell you a story: I have a friend, he likes go on the internet very much. Every day, he uses internet to read news or play internet games. So we can see the internet is more and more important in our daily life.
Topic3-The importance of environmental protection
Oh, this topic is surely very important. Isn’t it? Of course! It’s really very very important!
失败案例二：中式英文人见人晕(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic1-The happiest moment in your life
In our life, there are always some moments which make your heart flower opened angrily……
Topic2- The population problem
The population problem is a very big problem. For example, in the city centers of Shanghai, we can always see people mountain people sea there.
Topic3- Is there fairness in today’s business world?
I think in today’s society, there is no fairness in the business world. For example, I always chopped when I go out buy things……
Topic4- The advantage of being a nice person
Being a nice person have many advantage. I believe if a people always do bad things, he will get“baoying”.
失败案例三：观点模糊态度暧昧(喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例： Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think this topic is very hard to say. Because I am still very little, only17, and not married, so this topic is very difficult for me……
失败案例四：偏离主题无轨电车(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic-It is said that nowadays one can not acquire the qualifications and quality essential to success through university education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?(雅思真题)
I think to success, we must have a lot of important qualities. To have these important qualities, we must learn a lot of things, for example, English, music tools, and etc. We can learn these qualities from our teachers, our friends and from books. All in all, we can learn from many places.
失败案例五：语法错误惨不忍睹(喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic-If children behave badly, should their parents accept responsibility and also be punished?(雅思真题)
About this problem, my think is if children behave badly, then parents are not right. Because teach child is parent’s responsibility. So we also punish parents too besides children is also should.
失败案例六：过分简单没有重点(喷血指数：☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic-The importance of environmental protection
This issue is surely very important, let’s talk about it!
失败案例七：用词不当表达不准(喷血指数：☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic-Should college students be allowed to get married?
I think college students should not be allowed to get married because they are very young and so we can’t take the responsibility to form a family.
失败案例八：意思重复原地踏步(喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic-Your opinion on DINK families
My opinion on DINK families is that DINK families is not a good thing. And it is a bad thing. It brings no benefits to our society and it is even sometimes harmful to our society.
失败案例九：中国俗语胡乱翻译(喷血指数：☆☆☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic1-Is it good to have a large family?
I think it is good to have a large family. Because we Chinese believe a sentence:“Many sons, many lucks”……
正确说法：Happiness lies in having many children
Topic2-Should we pretend to know everything or admit our ignorance?
We all know, our Chinese old fathers and grandfathers said:“Know is know, don’t know is don’t know”……
Topic3- Do you think one’s character is greatly influenced by his/her family?
Chinese old words says very good: Dragon born dragon, phoenix born phoenix, rat’s son can make hole……
Topic4- The advantage of being a nice person
I believe one sentence:“A good person is all life safe”. We Chinese people always say:“Good has good pay, bad has bad pay”.
失败案例十：观点武断态度强硬(喷血指数：☆☆☆)
典型失败案例：Topic1-The importance of confidence
In my opinion, confidence is the most important thing for a person. All the successful people in the world are full of confidence. While those people who don’t have confidence, they all have failed.
Topic2- The solution to the traffic problem
I think to solve the traffic problem, very easy! For those who don’t obey the traffic rules, we should put all of them into prison. If we do that, I’m sure there will be no traffic problem any more.
以上就是同学们雅思写作开头时应该注意的地方，写作开头写好，给老师留下好印象，也就更容易得到老师的认可。祝同学们在考试中取得好成绩。
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