今天,成都雅思培训机构推荐大家了解小作文柱形图的两个考点,为你的小作文支招。本次小作文以4月6日真题为例举例说明。
一、作文题目
The chart below shows the sales of four kinds of games around the world in 2000 and 2006.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
二、解析
柱形图的两个考核点:数据之间的比较关系:
1. 同时不同项:在2000年的时候两种游戏之间的比较,同在2006年的时候四种游戏之间的比较。
2. 同项不同时:比如console games在2000年和在2006年之间的比较
二、高分范文及解析
Introduction
The bars are the illustrations of the sales of four types of games were sold worldwide in 2000 and 2006.
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Except console games, whose sales in 2006 had a slight decrease compared with the 2000’s level, all types of games were sold more in 2006 than in 2000. ←紧凑写法,展开写法→ The sales of console games in 2006 had a slight decrease compared with the 2000’s level. The opposite is the case in the other types of games. More copies of each type were sold in 2006 than in 2000. [这两种写法的区别在于:1、句型的复杂程度,紧凑复杂,展开简单。2、展开写法里用了一个完整的句子去描述信息之间的逻辑关系,在紧凑写法里是用一个词来描述逻辑关系。]
在描述完宏观之后,描述微观,于是全文的行文逻辑是:由总「general」到分「specifics」
As a matter of fact, the popularity of console games was already at a low level in the year of 2000, as only 50 million copies were sold worldwide that year. The contrast was obvious as console games were compared with handheld games. The sales of handheld games were 75 million copies in 2000, and they were almost 4 times higher in 2006. In terms of mobile phone games and online games, the sales of neither were available in 2000, and it is notable that the sales of both were considerable in 2006. The respective sales were 150 million and 180 million copies. At this point, it is clear that handheld games were most prevalent in the year of 2006.
Conclusion
Overall, the year of 2006 witnessed a remarkable increase in the popularity of those games compared with 2000.
以上就是成都雅思培训机构推荐大家了解小作文柱形图的两个考点,大家以后写柱形图的题都要记得比较同时不同项、同项不同时这两个点,这就该类题型的考点,大家都要写到才能得高分。更多雅思相关的可以咨询在线客服。
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