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2020年1月4日雅思大作文真题解析:电视播放审判现场是好还是坏?

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2020年的第一场雅思考试已经过去了,雅思写作是否还是考生们依旧头疼的问题呢?成都新航道的老师前面已经给大家分享了1月4日的雅思考试回忆,今天要给大家带来的,就是1月4日雅思大作文真题解析:电视播放审判现场是好还是坏?

1月4日雅思大作文题目

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备考事项

这次雅思作文涉及的是犯罪题材,和2016年10月22日考题重复。对于过去几年的考题大家可以多关注关注,比如2016-2018年题目。

这次犯罪题材的话题转换了提问方式,不是问犯罪的原因或方式,而是问“电视播放犯罪审判这个做法到底是好还是坏?”

雅思的作文命题非常灵活,所以大家在备考中如果抱着背到现题的心态,雅思作文部分是很难真正提升的。

审题解析

在审题中,可以发现两个关键词,一是犯罪审判(criminal trials),二是电视播放(shown on TV)。那么讨论这样的题目,我们应该从哪里下手呢?雅思写作有“三大层次”说,分别是物质层次、心理层次和社会层次。当我们将这三大层次用于这次的雅思写作话题,我们可得到以下可用的观点:

赞同:

(1)看电视审判犯人,我们可以学到很多关于法律的知识(物质层面);

(2)电视审判犯人,可以让观众内心感到害怕,从而不敢犯罪(心理层面);

(3)电视审判,关注面大,从而使审判显得更加公正(社会层面)。

反对:

(1)电视审判犯人,必定将犯罪细节公之于众,这在某种程度上是在宣传暴力(物质层面);

(2)因为知道要电视播放,法官和律师的注意力往往从案件审理转移到电视作秀,不利于法律的正常实施(心理层面和社会层面)。

自己的观点:作为公民,我们有权利知道犯人是如何得到审判的,因此我赞同电视审判犯人,但是电视审判中也要注意控制那些不宜播放的犯罪细节,并降低电视媒介对审判过程的不良影响。

高分范文

Whether criminal trials should be shown on TV or not has always been acontroversial issue. After discussing the advantages of this practice and its disadvantages, I come to believe televising criminal trials is a good thing as long as its negative effects are brought well under control.(本段提出拟讨论的问题,并明确给出自己的观点。)

Showing criminal trials on TV can serve multiple purposes at the same time such as educational, deterrent and regulatory. When watching how criminals are tried and sentenced, TV viewers will learn a great deal about the law and the legal system. In fact, it was from a televised trial that I finally understood it is a violation of law if you do not stop your car when you see a stop sign. Meanwhile, TV trials can help bring down the crime rate. People are fearful of their faces shown on TV after they commit crimes because it is generally considered to be a disgrace to the family. Finally, aware that they are watched by the general public, the lawyers and judges will have to make sure that the law is followed strictly and the justice is done to the highest standards.(本段论证电视播放犯罪审判的好处:学到法律知识,产生威慑作用,监督法官审判。请注意,本段开头使用了三个词(即“教育”“威慑”“监管”)高度概括本段的主要内容,使之成为一个标准的topic sentence。)

Admittedly, TV trials, particularly the live shows, may bring about negative effects as well. Often the TV trials will present a lot of details of the criminal offenses such as killing, embezzling, cheating, so much so that they become a promotion of these crimes. As a matter of fact, many juvenile offenders admit they have been under great influences of TV criminal shows. More importantly, in TV criminal trials, lawyers and judges may often pay more attention to their own personal images to the TV viewers, thus forgetting the real purpose of the trial, which is to find if a person is guilty or innocent and in this way, the justice may be sacrificed.(本段讨论电视播放犯罪审判可能带来的不良影响:宣扬犯罪细节;干扰法官判案。)

However, I personally do like the idea of putting criminal trials on TV. Besides telling us right from wrong in a more vivid way and preventing us from committing crimes, TV trials will let us know how the punishment ismeted out and how justice is done. This, I believe, is what our basic civil right is all about.(本段总结,并明确自己的观点。)

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